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Devasri Jegan's avatar

That feels so real, and I too feel the same. While I try my best to listen to myself, somehow I find myself drifting away as if my soul got tired of my mortal play. I loved this piece, and your poem is great!

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AsukaHotaru's avatar

The rain really said “set the scene,” and then the butterfly stole the whole poem.

Showing up like a tiny messenger with excellent timing.

I love how the pain doesn’t disappear~ it just gets company for a minute.

Porch swing magic. Wings optional.

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