As someone who spent almost a year behind the bar, I can't help but note that this description is very authentic. I'm impressed by how you turned it into poetry. <3
Thank you for your read and reply. I just went back through this and realized that I didn’t show my appreciation for your reading of this poem (rhythm) so I want to thank you now. I didn’t purposely skip a reply to you, I truly do appreciate that you’ve read my poem and replied honestly. Thank you.😊❣️❤️🩹❤️🤗
Tammy, this one had me grinning — it’s got that perfect bar buzz to it, all rhythm and heartbeat and just the right splash of sass. You’ve nailed the bartender’s juggling act — half mixologist, half therapist, full-time keeper of everyone’s secrets. “I’m pumping shine just to make you smile” might be my new favourite line of the week.
I could practically hear the glasses clinking and the crowd talking over the music. It’s got that end-of-shift warmth too — tired, proud, still smiling. Loved every pour of it~!
Stellar 🥂 if this was somehow merged with the bartending experience I’m sure the tip jar would filleth over — amazing poeticism
As someone who spent almost a year behind the bar, I can't help but note that this description is very authentic. I'm impressed by how you turned it into poetry. <3
For a little over 3 years, near 4, this is what I did every weekend night. You learn a few things, entertain, mix and pour 🤭😊
Thank you so much for your comment. ❤️🩹💜😊
That's really wonderful
Now I am just amazed by your poem
That's really a piece of art
Thanks for sharing and keep writing 💫
Just highlighting this part
just to make you smile
But the line I draw is
When I cut you off alcohol.
Thank you for your kind words!
Maam, i was rocking to this as if i had a pharell produced beat behind your words. When time is up, empty that cup...see ya! 👌🏾
I'm so happy you liked it. I lived it lol
I'm so happy to hear you liked this. It means the world to me to hear. Thank you!
Ooh I like the rhythm this poem has!
Thank you for your read and reply. I just went back through this and realized that I didn’t show my appreciation for your reading of this poem (rhythm) so I want to thank you now. I didn’t purposely skip a reply to you, I truly do appreciate that you’ve read my poem and replied honestly. Thank you.😊❣️❤️🩹❤️🤗
Holding a space for a comment.
Thank you so much for reading and liking my poem. I lived it you know. :)
This is fun! I like it!
Thank you
Nice poem. Has almost a bounce to it and moves along well. Lovely stuff.
Thank you
This is so good 👍
Thank you.
This is a very fun poem! I love it!
Thank you
Tammy, this one had me grinning — it’s got that perfect bar buzz to it, all rhythm and heartbeat and just the right splash of sass. You’ve nailed the bartender’s juggling act — half mixologist, half therapist, full-time keeper of everyone’s secrets. “I’m pumping shine just to make you smile” might be my new favourite line of the week.
I could practically hear the glasses clinking and the crowd talking over the music. It’s got that end-of-shift warmth too — tired, proud, still smiling. Loved every pour of it~!
Thank you. I lived it. lol